Hm
It was weird, but ok. The graphics were really nice, and the sound quality and effects were good too, I liked the song too. But I didn't really like that he killed himself.. I mean, it's a bit dis-respectful dont you think?
The graphics could of had some shading and shadows done to it, to lighten it up a bit, but it was good none-the-less.
I really liked the drawing of the snow-globe too on the preloader! Nice work.
Killing himself was kind of the point of the flash. Besides, who am I disrespecting? Jesus? I'm sure it was really his intention for his birth to symbolize buying crap for other people and having stores make a majority of their sales as people beat eachother to death for their Tickle-Me-Elmo's and XBOX360's for their ungrateful, nonreligious brats.
Hmm.
Not really a graphic intensive Flash, but it probablly survived by it's humour, which it was really funny. Did you make the song? If so thats even funnier, if it was a random downoad, it's still cool, but yeah.. lol. You could of had your own characters, but I rarely watch South Park so if it was from that it was cool.
Lol, it was random, which i'm not a big fan of, unless its a really smoothly animated and drawn Flash.
I personally wouldn't of scored it so high, around a 3 is ok, but I have no idea why this got so high? Is there something else?
I voted 5 everyday. (this used to be scored 1.80!)
Hey, it was only my first flash, but thanks for the honest review! :D
Wow.
I loved it, and the sound effects, where did you get it from?
You GOOD locks are amazing, I love the zoom effects you do! Haha. :-)
The graphics are real nice, and the intro was amazing. I just looked at the detail and my jaw dropped.
Keep it up dude, and have a great Christmas.
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www.findsounds.com
www.sounddogs.com
Very useful sites
It was good.
Nice animation, even though sprites aren't my favourite things. But I really liked the song, Green Day are good, and people never use them in thier animations. The menu was funny, it was a SS theme, which is good, as that is what you wanted to portray, however, I don't like the SS that much, bad reputation, so if this is your first Flash like this; get away from it.
People hate the SS, and your sprite animation is actually good. I hope you make some more.
umm..whats SS? I never heard of them (or that)
Nice.
Nice graphics, I really liked it. But the sound was dodgy. Some voices were real loud, and others were really quiet. That needed to be changed. Especially when the guy shouted.
The graphics were good, but the animation wasn't. There was hardly any animation was which boring. I'm sure you'll be alright at animating, no? Your good at drawing, and all it is is drawing alot of different frames. :-/
Anyway, the style was nice, it was a good changed, it was like old-school which was real nice! Haha, nice touch.
The humour was funny, with the square root of 4 = 2. That was good.
The ending was a let down, again with the bad sound quality :'(
I even agree that the sound was fucked.
And yes, I think I can animate. This isn't my first flash ya know.
Check out "The Kingpin" series. They are crappy, but I think I animated them alright.
Anyway, thanks for the review. You atleast thought it out and put time into it. Thanks.
Haha.
This is like Homestar, like the previous review stated, but I liked it. It was nice. And really nice graphics, it looks like alot of effort has been put into this, and your first Flash? Really?! Wow!
The sound quality was really nice, did you record the voices? The sound effects were also good quality too. The sub-titles were good too; just to have it that 'cartoon' style, however, most of the voices sounded the same (same character, present..). I liked it how you added echoe's too on that scene, was that inside or out-side Flash?
Really random, with that 'I' thing too. Real nice touch. And a remix of the simpons out-tune? Haha great.
I cannot really believe this was your first Flash, it was really nice, and I think you need.. wait no, you must submit more. Make it real funny, team up with some writers, and seriously.. you could go far. I like it how you have spent time and effort on this, which is always a good sign.
I hope to see more from you. Whenever, sooner.. or later. I'd rather you spent your time working on it. :)
Aw, man, god bless. This is by far the best review iv'e gotten yet! Thanx so much for the feedback! Anyways I am making another flash which I like to call: "The Worst Times" where two guys are talking about the worst things that have ever happened to them. Again, thanx!:P
Meh.
I guess it's ok, its a good short, if that is what you were trying to create. The animation was quite smooth, the preloader was the best bit of the animation though.
The sound quality was quite bad, you couldn't really hear you 'breathing' but it muffled when you started to shout, or the person recording it, which was one of the animation's flaws. It was quite a shock, and a really loud shout, when the guy started to scream too - it didn't make me 'jump' but it was a little shock, lol.
O yeah, one thing.. it isn't due to the laws of nature, its the law of science. ;-)
The graphics could of been a bit better, like shading wise, if you improved on that, i'm sure your score would improve too - just don't submit movies to get them through! Spend time on your movies, like work on them for like a week, then submit. It all pays off in the long time!
Yeah.... you are a pretty good reveiwer... and for that i think you... anywhos, yeah my mike didn't really record the screaming to well... its a cheapo...
and actually it is the law of nature... science didn't creat the law of gravity, nature did (in a sense)
and for the graphics... its was for a school presentation... didn't want to spend too long on it...
Hey.
The intro was really good, with the sound and then the characters came in. And also little touch with the humour. I have never watched these series so thanks for the note, also, at the beginning; yet it was a bit fast! I'm not that fast at reading, yet ;-P
I was really impressed with the openning scene, the graphics were really nice, bold colours, and with the backgrounds that complimented the other colours around it, you have a nice touch when it comes with shading; except you didn't shade the characters.
The animation was alright, it was more motion tweening then FBF - except for the hair - which is really what that style is mainly about so I liked it, except for when the people jumped out of the way of the arrow, it looked like they were flying; was that on purpose? Where they supposed to fly?
The graphics were really good, the proportion for the characters relating to themselves, backgrounds, etc. was really good, I was really impressed in what someone can achieve in Flash, and the ending graphics were nice, with the shading.. maybe you could implement that into the main movie.. I know it would take longer, but it would be a great touch.
Like I said I haven't really watched the series, so it was reasonably confusing on what was going on, however I will hopefully get around the watch the rest, but it looks real promosing! :)
When Inuyasha jumps in the series it seriously looks like he's flying. Not something I made up. Thanks for the helpful review! ^^
Woo.
Well done, really nice work, but I like the army guys lol. But these are nice guys, but im confused.. are the 'Bad guys' the army guys, and these are a different series? I remember you saying something like 'Im going to stop numbering these things' but im confused. :-(
However, back to the movie, this is a real nice movie! I love the type of colours you come out with for the characters, i'm glad they are like not just default colours. Haha, and also are you starting to introduce the line tool? Great stuff. I'm glad your like going into new style.
I think you need to get back to the army guys, I think they are just.. amazing, and they are my favourite series from the portal that I have watched grow, the others are just there that I never saw. :-(
Anyway, the humour and the sound of the characters is still the same, which is real good. I love it! It's really funny.. but have you edited the voices or can you actually say it like that irl? Lol. Cool!
I have never really found any easter eggs in your movies, or little secrets.. i'm not that good at spotting them, however, I think you should include some, it makes it really cool; and if you do, note it in the author's comments so we know that we should look for them.
Really nice work here, I mean really nice, its not just another 'Hey yeah, its cool.. another one to the collection' but your standard is high and you just never sease to fail. Lol. :)
Thankyou Chris for making such a cool series. ^.^
The "bad guys" are the grey ones that usually hang out in the background. The stars of this episode. It's the same series, I just decided numbers weren't needed since the episodes aren't really connected to each other. It's just kind of a fluid series, there's no set format.
Yeah I guess I did use more of the line tool. Some of the bar itself I had actually drawn for another animation that I gave up on, and it fit here. I'll use whatever tool works.
The only editing I do to the voices is to raise or lower the pitch. I do the accents myself.
I've never really done any easter eggs. I've thought about it. I'd like to do that in the future maybe.
Thanks a lot.
Yeah.
Not the best of the collab, and it was most FBF random animation; which isn't my favorite style. It was a bad opening, it should of been mixed.
All the parts were really good since they were made in 24 hours, but don't think you'll get any extra marks for that. I will review and vote like any other normal collab.
The intro was a bit plain, just black and white but atleast it got straight into the action, even though it was FBF, and it should of been mixed, like stated above, because 2 fbfs parts together was a bit bad, even though I liked the comic strip idea, haha.
I wouldnt call stab's part FBF but it was cool, ultimate fantasty's was a bit stupid, but 'Z's part was real nice, a bit confusing but nice.
There was little to no humur, the part where the sun rose up and hit the other thing away; what was that? I didn't like that, but the rest were really nice. Mypuddle has a nice drawing to begin with, but it disapointed me with the jpg image, the lock part I would of thought to have the .flas of the locks used, but I didn't know what happened. There are alot of parts in this collab, and it was real long to what I expected but it was a nice touch.
Alot of great talent all in one collab, was nice, and it was sad to see the few who didn't get in. ;-)
Thank you for the detailed review!
I don't understand what you mean about the intro - it was actually a mix of FBF and tweened animation, with the lettering and everything.
Not getting extra points for finishing the work on such a short deadline? Fair enough - I don't mind an objective view.
Glad you found things to like in some of the works - I tried to keep a big variety in there, so while inconsistent, there would be some interesting parts for everyone.
Thanks for the advice and critique, sir =)
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